David @ Gilberthorpe School
I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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what I did in whiting
what I did in writing
Music is More Important Than Sport
What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic?
Write to persuade your reader of your ideas.
Think about:
what your reader needs to know about the topic
how you are going to introduce the topic
the order of your ideas and how you link them
what to include in your summary.
Remember to:
choose your words carefully
take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.
Start your writing here: I say disagree because sports make your blonde
Pumping and vanes pumping too and get you energetic and fit too but in music
You get to learn how to. Make music but you just go and go until you finally learn how to use one instrument and it seems like a waste of time and in sport. You can play volleyball and soccer and basketball so music is a waste of time and there are hepes of things to do in sports and music but the music it takes a. lot. of time to master music and in the sport you just do something and you mastered the art of the sport and it is easy to do sport and there is lot’s of fun stuff in sport like volleyball and soccer and rugby and they are fun. To master
But in music it is boring to do because you do it for acapella hoers and that is a waste of. Time to do it and when you are good you get bored and you don’t want to do it anymore but in sport you are not bored and you are happy. Of your choices and you can get healthy so that is why I disagree.